Comment by Fraterkes
Let me help you remove the beam from your own eye first: this comment leaves me with the impression that your writing isn’t great.
Let me help you remove the beam from your own eye first: this comment leaves me with the impression that your writing isn’t great.
It's not organized well. As the reader I had to do too much work to discern your point and what was relevant. I'm sure it's obvious to you the writer, but one of the foundational skills of a good writer is empathy for their reader, whoever they may be. Even here, you think you're being open-minded, but you offered a multiple choice question, where the choices are reductive and it comes off as defensive. An open-ended question like "What problem did you have with my writing?" might elicit a better response.
I welcome specific and actionable criticism. Would you like to engage with my (a) substance; (b) tone; (c) something else?