Comment by shikaan

Hey, thanks for the feedback (:

The second article is still shaping up, but I felt like publishing it to get some early feedback. What you mention are a couple of the reasons.

At this point, I find it too dense (and it was even more so in first drafts) hence missing information. Maybe I should cut some parts, like the rip intro, and accommodate for more details about flags and conditions.

This is good signal for me. Thanks again for taking the time