Comment by thaumasiotes

> it has four, going on five, esoteric proper nouns in one sentence.

F'lar is unexplained within that sentence. Mnementh is also unexplained, but sounds like a constellation.

Fax and the High Reaches are explicitly marked as the names of a person and a place. Those are going to appear as proper nouns no matter what genre you're reading. It's the only possible way to do things. This is like complaining that Robin Hood's primary antagonist is the Sheriff of Nottingham. What's the complaint?